Show Don't Tell Exercises

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Here are the 'tell' elements for your show don't tell writing task. The worked examples and explanations can be found on Blackboard.

In each of the following replace the description with a paragraph in which you use the characters’ actions and words to convey the same message:

1. The hero was strong and handsome. He was admired by the townspeople. He was brave and wished to help those in need.
2. The wizard was ugly and evil. The people of the town were terrified of him. He enjoyed threatening them, especially the children. He was cruel and greedy.
3. The Knight was arrogant and greedy. He did not want to help others. He only wanted to be viewed as the most handsome and talented warrior in the land.
4. The peasants were kind and helpful. They were hard working and honest people. They were scared to drawing the attention of the wizard.
5. The land was beautiful, but harsh. The town was safe from the elements, but outside could be dangerous if one did not take precautions.
6. The reward that the hero was given was very valuable. It would allow the hero to continue protecting the less fortunate.